Sunday, May 26, 2013

A Poem about a Middle-Earth Adventure


This poem was written as a re-telling of a role-playing adventure in which the characters live during the 60-year period between the events of the Hobbit and the Lord of the Rings. 6 warriors, each of different backgrounds, meet up at Lake-town with a general desire to defeat evil and work together as a fellowship to experience adventure. 

Below is a four-part telling of the poem in Anglo-Saxon style (Each line has 4 stressed syllables, 2 separated by a caesura, or pause... and lots of alliteration and kenning. Kenning is a literary device used to depict objects metaphorically, such as whale-road = ocean)

THE FULL TALE OF THE WARRIORS SIX

I.

At Esgaroth                     The stilted city
Town on water                Ship never sailing,
Adventure awaited.        Free folk gathered
Few to the counting        Yet a strong-fingered fist
To strike the Shadow     And gain much glory.
From distant farthings   Hailed the Holbytlan;
Short folk they are          But sure-hearted the Shire:
Poppy Smallburrow       Landed at Laketown,
Found a round room      At the inn "River Bottom."
The second stranger       To find our fellowship
Was Erland the Barding; A man of Dale
Bold in battle                  And keen of eye,
Whose blessed blood      Keeps no cowardice.
Poorer are those              Who dwell in Mirkwood,
Woodmen and women:  But rich in courage,
Their bows & their axes Fell all foes:
So Ahir Kari                    Arrived in Esgaroth.
 Grimbarald was next;   And grim his face
Yet saves his scowls       For Sauron’s slaves.
The Beorning bows        To the Carrock-keeper,
And swings his blade     As the Grimmer Reaper.
In ancient days                Was Esgaroth named
By elven tongues            The Lake of Reeds;
Now fair Lindin              Strode in strength,
Wielding his wisdom     And joining our throng.
Last but not least             Was Balin the dwarf;
Young in his years          Yet hardy are they
Who live in the halls      Of the mountain-king;
Sharp is his axe               And also his wit.
These six assembled       At a humble inn
And quickly heard          The rumor-storm
That hapless scouts         Of Durin’s folk
Had disappeared.            Gloomy news
Yet perfect purpose        For a band of fighters.
To Gloin’s house            We hurried, hoping
Honor and glory             (and greater riches)
Awaited our gang.                 We came before
The grandson of Nar,     The companion of Thorin;
Gloin spoke:                    “Find my people!
For Balin the Old            And Oin my brother
Both are missing;            They are late to return
From the Long Marsh   And the shadows lengthen.
Find my kinsmen!          Handsome reward
Shall be given                 If your quest’s fulfilled.”
Bent then his brow,        Foreboding had filled him;
His mind-eye saw           His brother drowning.
With haste we left him,  Eager to gather
Supplies and a boat.       That evening, all ready,
We rested before             The early beginning.
Balin and Lindin:     Strange was their friendship,
The tree and stone          Agreed well together.
Hard-headed also            And twins in their folly,
That night they were looking   For a forge to borrow.
The last smith was closing, His shop was shuttered,
But the two spoke with him; Persuaded him not,
As strangers they seemed Dark and uncouth.
To the warriors’ alarm   The smith raised a cry,
“Guards! Guards!”         And the warriors fled
To a welcomer place,     To the Inn that we stayed at,
Where a blazing fire       And frosty flagons
Healed what ale’d em.   Then all our band
Did sleep, and night’s   Star-speckled dream-cloak
Covered our senses.        The cock later crowed.
The daylight roused us,  And swiftly we packed.
Down to the docks          Our feet gladly took us,
Into the river-steed         To ride the water,
The River Running.        Fiercely we rowed,
No fish was swifter.        That night we came
To the first falls;             Porters greeted us
With manly words.         We sat at meat
Together that night,        Trading our stories.
Next day, the porters      Carried the boat
Down paths on cliffs,     Such nimble goats;
They trod the rocks        And ate our cash.
On for three days            We took the wave-road
Until we approached      The mists of the marsh
And the hair on our necks   Stood up straight.
Our scouts scanned         For signs of life;
They found a trail,          And the boat was landed.
Into the marsh                        We warily crept,
Following tracks             That led to the forest.
Mirkwood the Great,      Hider of Shadows,
Teller of secrets              If made to confess.
Dwarves have gone missing;    Earthen clues
Point to the trees             And our company followed.
After some time,             A campsite’s discovered:
A couple days old,          But abandoned and empty.
Night’s black sheet         Covered all again,
But Balin’s stonecraft     Kept us all warm.
Valor and glory              Await the adventure;
Onward and forward      We seek for the lost.

II.

Valor and glory              Await the adventure;
Onward and forward      We seek for the lost.
The darkness came         As our fellowship camped.
Yet the halfling’s sight   Discovered at dusk
Watchers that waited--   Quiet crows
With scorn to share:       Wood Elves telling
Lindin a tale                    Of two dwarves down
A day to the south.         The captain of elves
Was Galion the cold,      No friend to dwarves
But fond of his wine,      Had slept when Bilbo
Burgled the barrels         To thwart Thranduil.
No wonder Galion          Nursed a grudge.
After the crows               Had cawed and left,
Finally the fellowship    Slept and were still.
Bright broke the morning, Breakfast to make:
I needed herbs                 To flavour the fish.
The elf almost                 Poisoned the posse
But Balin the dwarf        Found the foliage.
That day we returned     To the wave-steed’s side,
Darkened with doubts    And mysterious tracks.
Rowing and weaving     Through the perilous water,
With better skill              Lindin did guide us
Through  marshy maze, The River Running
Severed in streams,         And stinking swamps.
Yet faith flowers             In darkened places
And hope renewed         Companions’ courage.
The third day,                 We glided through glades
And pulled to the shore. As the sun marched
Down to her rest,            We marched through bogs.
A small hill rose              To greet our eyes
And all hands searched  The abandoned camp.
Where have you gone,   O children of Durin?
How have the folk          Of Erebor vanished?
Sturdy and grim                     Are Óin, Gróin’s son,
And grizzled Balin,        Whose father Fundin            
Fell before foes               In Azanulbizar
Which the elves called   Nanduhirion.
If Balin survived             That orcish battle,
Surely the shadow          Has not extinguished
That dwarven spirit.       But questions fell
From our tongues           Like autumn leaves
And died as we spoke.   Our own Balin,
Younger in years,           But fiercely focused
On seeing some clue,     Found hasty runes
On a rotting stump          And dug out the secret:
A box of ivory                And a scroll to the Lord
Of the Eagles in the West; We all were dazzled
By the glorious gem,      Gift of Dain
To the Wind Lord.          Yet message never
Reached Gwaihir            Or the Misty Mountains,
But was hidden here       In secret spells.
Balin Smith                     Forged a fireplace
Greater in craft                Than aught made before:
A micro-Moria                Of wondrous stone;
That bright shafts            Of light could turn
In every direction.          Darkness came.
Throughout the night,    Each watch was taken,
And shadows darker       Than light’s absence
Pressed around.               Strange splashes
And eerie lights              Increased our dread
When watching;              Corpse candles
Flickered faintly             And the hobbit heard
Nightly noises                 By the foul pool.
In the dead of night,       Smallburrow crept
To investigate                  The fishy sounds.
Lunging into air,             A troll emerged
And stood above             The hapless Halfling.
Poppy fired                     Her first arrow
And fled for cover.         Lindin next arrived
To battle troll                  With slayer’s doom
To make him strong.      Back and forth
Did the two strive,          And all the camp awoke.
The Beorning lit             A lantern to see
What foul menace          Threatened his sleep.
Setting it down,               He leaped in the light
And held in his hands     Mighty Fyrn-Bereofan,
The splitting axe             Of his grandfather Balderic.
He smote the troll           With a piercing blow,
Yet the monster was tough. Both elf and Beorning
Traded blows with the brute; And Balin Smith
Joined our fray.              Poppy Smallburrow
Nocked an arrow,           Aimed with gleaming
Eye at the enemy,           Sent the spinning shaft
Over the lantern’s glow, Sped between tree and elf
As tiny lightning             Struck its target:
Troll trembled                 As the door of its life
Was unlocked by a key  Both swift and terrible.
Enraged, it bellowed      And vainly plucked
The deadly dart               From its hellish hole,
Only to seal its doom     When blackish blood
Spurted fresh from         That mighty neck,
And fell forward             In the brackish slime.
Not to be outdone,          the doughty dwarf
(that Balin, heretofore    Described in full)
Leaped to bury                His blessed blade
In the hide of the troll,   Yet miscalculated
And buried it instead      In the behemoth’s buttock.
Then early light’s           Stealthy approach
Was proven when           The troll turned back
To stone again.               Undeterred,
Our noble dwarf             Added insult
To injury when he          Used stonecraft skills
To turn that troll             Into a fireplace and shelter All-in-one.                           The weary fellowship
Took rest and scanned   For further signs
Of missing dwarfs.         Ahir, quiet Woodman,
Scouted a track               That dwarves once walked.
We gathered our goods  And followed the trail…
Valor and glory              Await the adventure;
Onward and forward      We seek for the lost.

III.

Valor and glory              Await the adventure;
Onward and forward      We seek for the lost.
When last we chanted    The tale of the heroes,
Ahir woodman                Had traced the tracks
Of the missing kin          Of Gloin the dwarf.
Before we followed        The discovered clue,
We rested again              On that same hill.
On Grimbarald’s watch  His eyes grew weary;
Did not notice                 Serpent staring
Nor did he see                 Its falling form
Until too late.                  Constrictor’s coils
Grasped Grimbarald       In squeezing song,
Each loop of snake         A deadly stanza
Pulling the man               Toward death’s refrain.
The Beorning’s bulging Muscles were no match
For the sly serpent,         And all he could do
Was call for help.            Smallburrow roused
Herself from sleep,         Sensed trouble,
Heard the hero’s             Hoarse cries.
Waking the rest,              The Halfling hurried
And vainly cut                With dagger blade
The mighty beast.           By now fair Lindin
Arrived to seize              The spiral strength
But found it hard.           With valiant blow
He thrust his sword         But fate drove blade
Past snake to plunge       Into the shoulder
Of the Beorning.             Darkness shrouded
His senses as he              Fainted from the blow.
Yet Grimbarald’s friends      Betrayed him not
But bravely stood           Over their comrade,
Stabbed and hacked       That snake to death.      
Poppy Smallburrow       Used healing arts
To aid the man.               All was calm.
Yet evil lurked                Above the trees
While tired travelers       Lay down to sleep
As Poppy took                The last watch of the night.
Many eyes glinted          Before they sprang.
But swifter than spider   Was the hobbit’s hearing
And two war needles      Smote the shadows
In the gloomy trees,        And fell beasts
Dropped dead                 Out of the branches.
By the time                      Courageous comrades
Arrived, they found        The hobbit retrieving
Her quiver’s quota.         Back to camp
Again they yawned.       They cleared the cobwebs
From their eyes               And continued on
Their perilous journey   Through marsh and muck.
Back in the boat                     On the fifth morning,
The company rowed      Down Running River
(Though sluggish be      Its wandering ways)
And followed the traces Of dwarven doom.
The lively stench            Of Rotting River
Flowed from Mirkwood To join Celduin.
Past this foul                   Confluence of chaos
Drifted our island           Of hope and hardiness,
Followed further             To shallow fens.
Grimbarald and Poppy   Stayed in the boat
While the rest                  Searched for signs
As light waned                Toward gloaming-time.
Their eyes found joy      When saw in the water
A dwarfish boat;             But gladness turned
To sorrow’s surprise      At the sunken state
Of the small vessel.        Claw marks
Scratched the surface     Of their wave traveler.
Further in the fen,           We spied bone-piles.
Sensing foreboding,       The band of companions
Pressed onward               With careful courage.
Lighting a lantern,          We hooded the sun-spill
And ventured forward    Into the tangled
Vines and vexations        Of the Long Marshes.
After dark,                       three in the wave-steed
And three in the water,   Who pulled them deeper
Into the net.                     One of us remembered
Some lore: the Wood     Of Hanging Trees
Is the place we had come.     All too soon
We found out why          They call it that…
For gallows-weed           Is their other name.
Our stealthy boat            Glided past trunks
And darkened vines.      Fast now, Balin
Was attacked above        But not by beast.
The very woods              Are bent against
Our good quest,              And sought to slake
Their thirst for death      By jerking the dwarf
Up in the air,                   Choking with vines
Like living ropes.           Down in the boat
Lay the Beorning            With fear and fatigue,
Helpless to help.             Erland and Ahir
Were grabbed by the weed,  Pulled to dangle
Above their friends        By the fell trees.
What horror when          The things of earth
Do strive to kill               The sons of earth!
As if a mind                    Were filling trees
And vines with malice.  Bent were they,
Bent to harm us,              Waylay and destroy.
Yet elf and Halfling        Did not forsake us;
Of great worth was         Their friendship shown.
Poppy’s arrows,                     Keen as always,
Bit the vines                    To break two free.
Balin bit his own             With arrows of
His dwarven teeth           And fell in the boat.
Our rage was roused       Against the creepers;
With flame and blade     We fought back well.
We blazed a trail             For fellowship’s freedom;
We found a patch           Of clearer sky
Where stars shone           Onto our boat.
We had some peace,       And made our camp
Without a fire.                 Inside our ark
The warriors six              Were huddled down
To catch our breath.       I saw in the heavens
The Swordsman of the Sky  Passing over
Our small company,              And drew some hope
For our grim quest.         Where have you gone,
O Durin’s folk?               Where do your axes lie?
Then into sleep               My head soon nodded.
The sixth day started      With a crow on our mast,
That flew away               Before all had woken.
The battlefield’s bird      Had flown to the south
So our fellowship followed, Half in the muck
And some in the boat.    The fen grew lighter
But misty were the trees In the distance beyond.
Soon we had dragged     Our supplies to those trees,
And spied 12 spies         Whose feathered heads
Stared our way                With coldest glances.
Ahir bent                         His mighty bow
And loosed an arrow      To find a mark,
But the crows departed. Soon we saw
More claw marks            On tree trunks.
We went further              To find some ruins
Drowned by the fen,       And a choice to make:
Open water                      To the southeast,
Or an embankment         That led to a hill.
Dry land we chose          And scouted the slopes.
There we had time          To make a small camp,
Eat our rations,               And kindled a fire.
We held our watches      In twos to protect
Each other from danger.              That night
Balin Smith                     Pulled out the gem
That Dain made gift       To the eagles’ lord.
He caressed the jewel     And fell asleep,
His hand open.                A crow snatched
The sparkling gem          And flew away.
Ahir chased it                  But the dwarf was fey
And took his aim            With stone and stick
At the woodsman.           An arrow grazed
The crow’s wing             And the gem was dropped.
But dragon’s greed         And treasure lust
Had grazed the wing      Of Balin’s soul.
He fought to take            The jewel fair
To keep it himself.          Here is the sorrow,
The tale of the fight        That threatened the friendship
Of the warriors five        With the young stonesmith.
The gem was finally       Given to Lindin
Who kept it high             In the tree’s branches
Where he slept, yet fell  Like strange fruit
In the night.                            Balin came
To his senses                   And regretted his deeds.
The company rested              And sought to sleep.
A bell sounded,               Distant and remote,
Beorning, hobbit,            Barding all left
To follow the call           And spell’s trance.
Behind were the dwarf,  Tightly tied up
To the wood, and the elf              Asleep in the wood,
And the woodman too.   How much would
Could the woodman       Budge, if a woodman
Could budge wood?       It mattered not,
Since Ahir also               Failed to resist
The enchantment.           He walked away
While elf freed dwarf     And they followed together.
They saw the tracks        Of their friends
Disappearing                   Into the woods
Along with familiar        Tracks of two dwarves
That we had long            Looked to discover.
Down the hill                  Went the fey woodman,
Walking to the edge       Of the water and ruins.
A deep pool beckoned   And the warrior-friends
Held Ahir Kari                From a strange summons.
Where have all gone       Into depths of the earth?
What weird foe               Has summoned us all?
And what greater power       Can bend the aims
Of the darkness to serve        A greater good?
Illuvatar knows.                     The quest continues…
Valor and glory              Await the adventure;
Onward and forward      We seek for the lost.

IV.

Valor and glory              Await the adventure;
Onward and forward      We seek for the lost:
Erland the boldest           Man of Dale,
Ahir Kari,                        Man of Mirkwood,
Grimbarald,                            Man of the Carrock,
Lindin the Elf                  Of the Woodland Realm,
Balin the Stout                Dwarf of Erebor,
Poppy Smallburrow,      Hobbit of the Shire.
These warriors six          Had pledged their word,
Their wits, each sword   And axe and arrow,
All to succor                    Gloin’s kinsfolk
Vanished into                 The Long Marshes.
This mighty band           Was cleft in two:
The quest in danger        From the distant toll
Of the Marsh Bell.          Enchantment and evil
Divided the fellowship   ‘Tween open sky
And caves underwater.   Poppy, Erland,
And Grimbarald too              Woke on steps
Ruined and crumbling,  Free from the spell
Of the bell of the marsh. Deep underneath
The surface they were,   Glowing moss
Growing on tunnel         Beyond the steps.
Together the travelers    Rose to explore.
The dim tunnel               Led to a cavern,
Vaulted and vast             And the home of deep shade
(And worse, as we          Were soon to find).
Axeless, the man             Whose master was Beorn,
Acutely embarrassed      At being in nightclothes,
Borrowed the sword              Of Poppy Smallburrow,
Though it seemed as if   He held but a knife.
Into the darkness            Boldly the Halfling
Followed the tracks        Of Balin and Oin.
Behind her came             The Beorning and Barding
To subterranean                     Passageways old.
A brief exploration         Rendered surprises!
A marsh dweller             Stood and scowled
With glowing eyes          And fearsome claws.
It shuffled toward           Erland the fighter,
Exchanged blows           And bites for damage.
Still the Barding              Met it bravely,
Lured it out                     Of the narrow tunnel,
For the halfling’s shaft   to find its mark
And bring it down.         Erland finished it.
Close call,                        For others may come.
The next tunnel               Showed signs
Of fleeing footsteps,       So wisely we went
Further across                 The cave in the gloom.
Along the wall,               The company saw
A chimney’s ruins.         Grimbarald looked
Up through the hole,      And found an exit.
Daylight’s well               Reached the cavern
Far below.                       Crow feathers
Littered the floor.           A rope dangled
But no one pulled it;       Bells may be
At the ends of things,     And we had enough
Of bells, bells,                 Bells, bells,
We’d had enough           Of crows and bells.
Nevermore                      Did we want to hear them;
Poe-try’s fine                  But even poets
Can have enough            Of blasted bells.
So there we were:           Two ways of escape
But two dwarves             To discover. Hark!
Some marble steps          We found ahead:
Descending down           To a set of doors,
Sturdy yet battered;        Scratched with claws
Of dreadful beasts.         We knocked with hope
And waited for answer.  Feebly we heard
A muffled reply,             And the bolt was opened.
Old Balin and Oin          Were still alive,
Starving and weak          But near death’s door.
Behind us stamped         The feet of friends
And our fellowship        Was reunited!
Quickly we greeted        Dwarf, elf, and man,
Who followed tracks      Of the trail of our trance
To the murky pool          And hidden tunnels
To find our initials          Carved by the steps
And hurried to catch us  In this craven cavern.
Well met we were,          And smiles sprang
To darkened faces:         Then died in a moment
When screeches echoed Across the room
And our hearts froze      In fear of pursuers,
Of marsh dwellers          Whose evil hunger
Would make this place   Our grave and tomb.
Should we strike             For the watery tunnel?
No good, for the crowd  Of shambling creatures
Came that way.               What then, to the chamber?
To bar the doors             Like the dwarves had done,
And gnaw on leather      When our food was gone
And wish for death         In the thick darkness?
No! There is glory          In a shrewd departure,
In a desperate attempt    That stands some chance.
Quickly our pact             Was made with each other,
But not quick enough.    We fled across
To the ancient chimney, Bid the hobbit
To clamber above           To stand as a guard
And wait for the rest.      The cries of the beasts
Came nearer now,           And as we ran
We formed a defense,    To ward off the blows
For the duo of dwarves  And buy some time.
Erland assisted them,      Yet Ahir, Grimbarald,
Young Balin and Lindin All loosed their weapons
And arrows let fly.          Balin had brought
The Beorning a present; His great splitting-axe,
Abandoned at camp,      To gladden the man,
So the dwarf handed      The axe back to him.
Grimbarald broke           Into laughter, for ‘twas
The blade of Balderic,    His wise grandfather,
Named Fyrn-Bereofan,  Ancient Bereaver
And cleaver of orcs,       Wargs, and attercops
When Balderic’s forefather  Lob-Hunter slew
Giant spiders                   In yesteryear
Near the dim mountains Of grim Mirkwood.
Without any armor,        The Beorning did battle
And hewed with his axe The first of the dwellers
That came upon him.     Ahir and Balin
And Lindin were fierce  In their blows to their foes,
For the time allowed      Oin and Balin
To start their climb         Up the shaft to the sky.
The Warriors Six            Were reduced to Four
When Balin helped         His kin of Erebor
To escape the doom.      Hardy were we,
Yet the claws and jaws   Of the marsh dwellers
Tore our armor,              Tore our skin,
And crowded around     Two score deep.
Lindin was wounded,     Desired to stay,
But we waved him on    To help the others.
Desperate now                Was the stand of the Three.
Woodman, Barding,              Beorning all brave,
Battled the monsters,      Hacked, slashed,
Parried and pierced        The fell dwellers.
Yet on they came            Relentlessly
And the Beorning fell    Under their bodies.
Courage then flamed      In the heart of Erland,
Leaped to defend            His fallen comrade.
With bitter lessons          He taught the beasts
To fear his spear.            The Man of Dale
Spilled the blood            Of the Marsh’s minions,
Feared not their fight      But dreaded defeat.
Now stood only Two,     And they were fey.
Then from beyond          The deadly din,
Pure notes poured           Down heaven’s well,
A song of strength          From their friends above
And lifted their hearts    To endure this hell.
With renewed power,     The Barding broke
Away from his enemies, Carried the fallen,
Ran to the side                Of the good woodman,
Covered Ahir                  As Ahir Kari
Pulled the Beorning’s     Unconscious body
Into the chimney.            Erland faced
The creature-horde         Of the Long Marshes.
He stood in the hearth    Where ancient fires
Had once blazed             In happier days
When the safe Road       Of the Old Forest
Had provided places       For weary dwarves
To rest their burdens      And warm their hands
Between the Mountains And the Iron Hills.
That fireplace now         Was cold and still,
But the Man of Dale       Kindled his wrath
And furiously beat          Back the beasts
As only One                    Remained to fight.
Up the air-road               Flew these eagles.
But the burden                Of Beorn’s man
Slowed them down.        Over and over
Erland was attacked       As Marsh dwellers
Climbed after them.        Out of the chimney
Emerged on the hill        Ahir, Grimbarald…
But before the Barding   Could climb free,
The monsters raked        Erland’s back
With cruel claws             And he fell unconscious
Towards the hole.           Were it not for the arms
Of his companions         Who carried him out.
The beasts feared            The day’s eye
So scrambled back         Into their lair.
All was quiet                   For a short rest.
Poppy was able                      To heal the Barding
And the Beorning           Enough that the party
Could get to the boat      And return to Laketown.
Ahir and Poppy              Guided the wave-rider
Through the Marshes     To the River Running.
Finally they reached              Their old campsite
With the rotten stump.    Only once did they hear
The Bell of the Marsh    Toll to enchant them;
All but young Balin        Shambled to follow.
That night the dwarf       Saved our lives
And the next morning    Found us all tired.
Half-alive in the boat,    Grimbarald sighed…
Though thankful for              The eight surviving,
Fyrn-Bereofan                Was lost forever.
The axe of his ancestor  Had dropped in the fight,
Was still in the cavern    Of the foul brutes
Who almost ended          The Warriors Six.
Grimbarald sang             A song of mourning
For the splitting-axe       He would wield no more.
There let it lie,                 Mused the Beorning,
A mute testimony           To the Marsh shadow-spawn
That the courage of comrades     Overcame evil
To rescue the hapless     And deny them their prize.
Their lair was despoiled,       And thus their defeat
Would e’er be declared  By the blade on the floor.
And so the companions  Returned up the river,
Rowed out of reach        Of the curséd bell,
Regaled the porters         By the waterfall,
Took the lake-path         Toward Esgaroth.
Then they could see       The ship of the Master
Of Lake-town coming,   With Gloin onboard,
And people cheering.     Thus were they welcomed
As heroes come home    And the time of their resting
And healing had come.  Let ale flow,
Beards wag,                     Tales be told,
Thanks given.                 All shall be well.
Valor and glory              And adventure they gained,
Onward and forward!   For they found what was lost.

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